My audience feedback shows that mainly there is a confusion of the genre of music, the artist does not portray enough of a 'rock' genre. I am going to change this by making the mise en scene fit better by adding darker make up and maybe an instrument or microphone.
My audience feedback also shows how they cover lines should have a variety of fonts and sizes to make it more eye catching. Also there could be a slogan placed on the black line.
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